Weather Haikus
Well, since my animal haiku post actually got a couple of responses, and I can't think of anything else to do on this blog right now, I'm announcing a new haiku subject - the weather. Here is a haiku I've written about today's rain.
It drizzles and stops
Will it rain or will it not?
I am at a loss.
I know haikus aren't traditionally supposed to rhyme, but my compulsive use of slant rhyme seems to occur automatically at times.
Now it's your turn to write a weather haiku.
It drizzles and stops
Will it rain or will it not?
I am at a loss.
I know haikus aren't traditionally supposed to rhyme, but my compulsive use of slant rhyme seems to occur automatically at times.
Now it's your turn to write a weather haiku.
posted by Heidi Bloom at 7:24 PM
6 Comments:
Now it is raining
So why can't I go home now
Not liking my job
I don't have a haiku, but I must say that I really like yours. Well done. You have a great talent.
John, I think you're underselling your haiku talent. The first one made me laugh out loud, and the second one, while amusing, is also really well written.
I share the same attitude toward snow.
On beautiful days
I sit inside drinking beer
I love to waste time.
I hate when it snows
And my car is parked out outside
I need to shovel.
>:(
it is never quite
the way i want it to be
screw the weatherman
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